这段胡译还是校对一下吧，真有点误人子弟

Sue

胡译：《般若之旅》p15

克：“假设你照着我的话去观照受伤的情况，例如逃避，暴力等等，你就在印证我的话。就像以文字组成的交响乐团，一个感情的交响乐团：一切都在流动中。只要实际去观照，我的话和你的领悟就没有冲突。但是你一旦强调要一目了然，这个领悟就结束了。”

原文是：
If I am following exactly what you are saying - seeing that the image is hurt and then the escape, the violence - I am moving with you. It is like an orchestra, an orchestra of words, an orchestra of feeling, the whole thing is moving. As long as I am moving with you, there is no contradiction. Then you say `Once you see this as a whole, the thing is over - 'am I with you?

校对译文：
如果我确切理解了你说的话-看清受伤的是形象，以及随之而来的逃避，暴力-我就是和你一起在流动。就像一个交响乐团，一个由文字组成的交响乐团，由感觉组成的交响乐团，这个整体在流动。只要我和你在一起“流动”，就没有冲突。然后你说，“一旦你把这作为一个整体看清了，这件事情就结束了”（意思是所有的伤害，逃避，暴力，都终结了）-我和你是在一起么？

csfortune

这本书根本没法看，已经扔了

no_or_yes

回复 3# Sue


有同感，‘胡’译，喜欢借用佛教词汇，无奈只有自行参看原文，尤其是其翻译推介的老克传记，不知道是否包含其个人揣测臆造，无奈是个大厚本

Sue

把原文的上下文也贴上：

D: So your word is like a pointer.
K: No, no.
S: So long as I am moving with you, there is a relationship.
K: The moment I break that relationship, then begins my question: How am I to do it? If I am following exactly what you are saying - seeing that the image is hurt and then the escape, the violence - I am moving with you. It is like an orchestra, an orchestra of words, an orchestra of feeling, the whole thing is moving. As long as I am moving with you, there is no contradiction. Then you say `Once you see this as a whole, the thing is over - 'am I with you?
S: It has not happened.
K: I will tell you why. Because you have not listened.
S: You mean to say that I have not listened for twenty years?

Sue

克的原文里，没有“照着我的话去观照”“印证我的话”这样的意思，这么说很容易造成按照理论或者原则行事的错觉。“观照”也是胡擅用的佛教术语。尤其是最后一句，意思满拧，误导读者。

'moving with'，暂译成“一起流动”，这个词本身说的是倾听中的交流，就像两个朋友一起在行走一样。